A Simple Metaphor (And a Simile)

like an overripe peach,
still on the branch
im soft and out of reach,
drawing ants;
all of my friends left before the leaves
they fell or were picked,
off to plant their seeds
yet any who eats me, will only get sick.

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2 Responses to A Simple Metaphor (And a Simile)

  1. maelinat says:

    I really liked that one. And I did not get nausea: I just read.

  2. thejetclub says:

    Im glad you didn’t get sick!

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