Don’t Drop Hints, You’ll Make a Mess

all the hints i used to pick up
now scatter the floor
of some distant hallway
that i’ve never been to before.

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One Response to Don’t Drop Hints, You’ll Make a Mess

  1. Hey. Thanks for the comment on my haiku… thought I’d come and check your site out. Glad I did :) This is a really cool poem. Stunning metaphor.

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